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Thursday, May 7, 2020

pobble story

This link is for a google doc that is a pobble story. The pobble pick that made me think of transformers, but this isn't fully transformers, it's a story based on it and if you haven't seen transformers, this is the story for you https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WoRsZD3LfRrxE558eohNoFedZS16iFhrxvMKuU9qlVA/edit






1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Alex,

    WOW, what a great story! It is great to see you engaging so well in your writing tasks. Pobble writing is a great time to activate your imagination which you have done so immensely, ka pai!
    Remember, it is important to add detail to our story, e.g. explain the scenery/feelings/etc, to give the reader a clear picture in their heads and understand the story. Quality not quantity.

    I have given you a Digital AWHI for your story. I can't wait to read your next story!

    :)

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